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Optimer dit sprog - Læs vores guide og scor topkarakter
Uddrag
The evening sun middles the sky like a piece of glows coal takes out of fire and leaves to cool down. It holds back its flames, yet make sure to cast its blazes shadows on the surroundings before it sets.
I fly closer and closer to the sun, yet it didn’t hurt me to come that close. It is a cold sun, old, just like myself; and as I am starting my voyage, it is getting ready to leave for another destination.
The vast space is embracing in perfect stillness, void of any movement except for the nomadic birds passes by, greets me with a side glance or a wag of tail.
Beneath me are scattered oil ships and fishing boats that appears from above like puffs of cloud floats in a lower sky; a perfect reflection of my upper surroundings.
It dawns on me that I am completely alone – no humans, no nothing. I feel alarmingly free, and that scares me, and the only way to shake the fear is to keep on fly towards nowhere;
and I do it for long hours until there is no light to be seen, except for the navigational beams of the distant lighthouse, and some glows unidentified shapes beneath me.
After long aimless flying, I give in to fatigues. My stomach rumbles with hunger. I need somewhere to land and something to eat. A couple of scatters boats beneath me glows amid the darkness. One of these boats will do, I think.
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Der bliver brugt substantiver, præposition, adjektiver og verbum i teksten. Ved brug af de ordklasser i teksten vil det fange læseren, så det ikke er en kedelig tekst man læser.
Når der bliver beskrevet noget i teksten, er det vigtigt der bliver brug adjektiver. For så kan man måske selv føle, at man er til stede selvom man egentlig ikke er det selv.
Her er nogen eksempler på ordklasserne i teksten:
”Coram Voice is looking for volunteers who will champion the rights of vulnerable children and young people.
Whether you are currently studying, recently graduated, working part-time, retired or between jobs, volunteering with Coram Voice is a great opportunity to make a difference and gain experience of working for a national children’s rights charity.” (ll.1-4)
I teksten bliver der også beskrevet, at de kan tilbyde en op til £ 20,00
rejseudgifter og bidrag til frokost på £5,00. Det gør at vi læsere bliver lokket til at gerne vil hjælpe fordi, vi får noget får det.
Her er et eksempel på hvad man kan få ud af at deltage:
”In addition, we offer you up to £20.00 travel expenses and £5.00 contribution towards lunch.” (ll.6-7)
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